I was elated, chastened and heartened when the telephone rang awhile back and Natalie said, "I used to pre-read Macho Caballo for you when it was on rec.arts.anime.creative. Are you still writing it?" The answer was 'Yes!' And now I've been going over what will become Volume 2 of the Macho saga, with a lighter spirit and renewed determination.
If plans go correctly, Macho 2, 'Looking for Lucha' in the next few months. I do need a cover, however. I used Lyn's drawing of the three main characters in the first volume, Machita, Estrellita and Sandy, but for volume 2 I feel I should find someone more experienced in the cover designing field. Things are looking up.
This next scene of Macho Caballo Vol. #2, which follows 'return of the champion,' has been a bit of a nail-biter for me. I know what I'm going to say, yet I can't seem to wrap my head around the way I want to say it. We've introduced Ramon and his amigos (along with one who isn't exactly friendly). Ramon has been trying to decide whether or not he's going to go off to northern Mexico to search for a sister who may not even be real. In this scene we give him a bit of a boost and get his friends in on the deal. This was the way the scene was originally written and I've come to dislike it.
That's what's puzzling me at the moment (along with trying to deal with Real Life which keeps poking in and saying 'Hey! You can't ignore me!'
So, I'll be back on it. Gotta ride that horse no matter how many times it throws me.
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Short scene -- we'll have an extra one later on to make up for it.
Intent on her task, Doll-Maker was startled to hear the still of the night shattered by the yip and growl of village dogs as they converged on an intruder.
Comforted by the familiarity of the sound, she returned to the doll which a powerful dream had compelled her to fashion. It was a corn-shuck doll, with the dress and manner of a young man, but the weapons she attempted to fashion would not remain tied to the doll's hands. The shield would slip off, and the tiny knife refused to remain belted about its waist.
As she held the figure and wondered, a noise at the entranceway drew her attention. Looking down, she beheld a creature slinking across the floor to shiver before her, beseeching with its eyes. There was a streak of white diagonally across its back.
She smacked her cheek solidly with her palm and groaned.
"You did it. You did it anyway. I warned you, and you made them angry despite all I did!"
The wolf cub whined and hung its head, avoiding her glare.
I really don't remember why I started numbering the chapters in Spanish. Perhaps it was all I knew or could look up with confidence, back in the beginning of the story. I've learned a couple more words since then, but by now the precedence has been set. So, we're working on Chapter 16: Diez y Seis, and this is the second scene in that chapter — 'A Champion Emerges.'
In the Azuma village the Doll-Maker has taken matters into her own hands to choose a champion and send him to Cave of the Spirits in order to gain their blessing. We resume our narrative as this stalwart individual arrives and is questioned.
In the valley of the cave, in the cavern of the springs, a brave person was answering a question. The question, posed by voices which sounded like the lapping of Water or the whispering of Wind, echoed from the walls like pebbles bouncing about a gourd.
"Who are you, and what do you want, young seeker?"
That brave person should have remembered the warning given him by the Doll-Maker when she said, `Ask for nothing. Give your name and wait. Say nothing more - do not boast. Above all, do nothing to offend them.'
He was a warrior, above petty fears. His bravery swept her words from his mind and he spoke aloud, "I'm Wolf Walker. I'm the strongest of my tribe. I deserve to be given this opportunity! I want to be the one to bring down the sorcerer Ka..."
Wolf Walker staggered back, the command ringing in his ears. Unlike the other voices, this one had no echo.
"Young fool, do you wish to call that foul one here? Do you think we care for your worldly troubles?"
"He does not think," concluded the Wind.
"Pity," the Stream gurgled, "The lad is so handsome."
"All is not lost," it answered itself, "We must remember his courage."
"Child!" the whisper commanded again, "What do you wish?"
Wolf Walker searched the dim reaches of the cavern for the speaker as he mulled his answer. "I want to be the one who..."
"Enough!" the Wind said harshly, "That would impress others. What would you have?"
"Enough! I want nothing!" cried the Azuma youth, "I will not be frightened by a bunch of whispering women!"
"He is just like the other," gurgled the Stream, while another voice, like Rocks grinding together, added, "We should do better. Do they not teach these youngsters anything?"
"But, he is all we have," said the Stream, with a sigh that might have been despair. "He is Rabbit, as the name given him by his mother at birth. He is Fleet, as the name given him by the medicine man Toes-on-Fire."
"There is the other, She Goes Ahead," suggested the Rocks.
The bodiless voice sighed. "In the end, when shadows flow and the light flees, one such as that may have to serve. Yet, until then we need another. This one must do. He is Wolf Walker, as the name given him by his companions for his bravery in stalking wolves."
The whisper took up the chant. "Let it be so."
In the ensuing uproar, a brave warrior voiced a heart-rending cry.
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